Subject: Re: CREEPY POST 3 Mon Jan 08, 2024 3:39 pm
GrinnyKitty wrote:
Problem implies there's something wrong, which there isn't? I'm just talking to my friend about his/her story, I'm not stopping you from doing the same. We're all equal here
...um yeh but ur obviously trying to take the spotlight away from Lethal's genius intellect...so there is a problem actually...so learn to shut your trap and let the smarter people talk first...
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Subject: Re: CREEPY POST 3 Mon Jan 08, 2024 3:44 pm
You know what, okay. Fine. Sorry I said anything. LethalSweety is the literary expert now, culture is dead, Whoopdy-Doo!
LethalSweety
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Subject: Re: CREEPY POST 3 Mon Jan 08, 2024 3:46 pm
GrinnyKitty wrote:
You know what, okay. Fine. Sorry I said anything. LethalSweety is the literary expert now, culture is dead, Whoopdy-Doo!
this is my favorite thing youve ever said
Goblin thinks this post SUCKS!!!
The Collector
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Subject: Re: CREEPY POST 3 Mon Jan 08, 2024 3:50 pm
LethalSweety wrote:
we are not equal you are below me in levels you can't even understand these are numbers past negative infinity you cretin.. youre going to confuse this poor soul with your nonsense because you just don't have a proper understanding of this world like I do..
Wow, you're so wise! We should stick you on a mountain for 1000 years and see how wise your wisdoms are when you come back, Kiki~!
LethalSweety
Posts : 257 Times Spotted by the Killer : 277 Join date : 2023-12-28 Location : Uncanny Valley
Subject: Re: CREEPY POST 3 Mon Jan 08, 2024 3:51 pm
my mind will be grown like a beautiful baby boy..so full of new ideas and criticism..
Goblin and ghost detective think this post SUCKS!!!
CreepyPoster35
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Subject: Re: CREEPY POST 3 Mon Jan 08, 2024 8:41 pm
GrinnyKitty wrote:
Um I'm not really sure what that goblin account is lol weird but this is great! It's your third story ever and it's already incredible! The only critisism I can think of is maybe try building some more atmosphere, let things sit, I like that your story gets straight to the point but the pacing feels a little rushed in places. Great job though (P.S I love the drawing XD)
THANK U :d I WILL TRY TO BUILD MORE ATMOSPHERE IN MY NEXT SCARY POSTA.
ALL CRITISICM IS APPRECIATED BE IT PROFESSIONAL OR AMATURE! :d
Subject: Re: CREEPY POST 3 
