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PostSubject: CREEPY POST 3   CREEPY POST 3 EmptySun Jan 07, 2024 6:30 pm

THIS IS A STORY ABOUT A YOUNG ASPIRING WRITER, SHE LOVED TO WRITE. EVERY DAY SHE WOULD READ BOOKS AND THINK UP STORIES IN HER MIND. SHE WAS A NORMAL GIRL, SHE WAS 15 SHE HAD FRIENDS AND SHE LOVED HARRY POTTER BOOKS.

SHE ALSO HATED HER OWN NAME. IN THE ONLINE SPACE SHE DECIDED TO GO BY THE USER NAME "A.K BOWLING." SHE ALSO LOVED TO MAKE UP HER OWN FUN AND ORIGINAL CHARACTERS. SHE LOVED WIZARDS SO SHE MADE WIZARD CHARACTERS, CHARACTERS SHE NAMED THINGS SUCH AS "BARRY HOTTER" "JOHN REAZLEY" AND THEY HAD AN EVEN ENEMY WHO WANTS TO KILL THEM NAMED "VOLDEDORE"

WHEN SHE WAS SIMPLY DRAWING PICTURES AND UPLOADING THEM TO HER TUMBLR BLOG, ALL WAS WELL, SHE GOT MANY NOTES MANY LIKES MANY COMMENTS. HER FANS ENCOURAGED HER TO WRITE AN ORIGINAL STORY WITH HER FUN OC CHARACTERS. THIS WOULD BE HER UNDOING.

MS BOWLING SPENT WEEKS WRITING HER FIRST "ORIGINAL" NOVEL. SHE GAVE IT THE HIGHLY "ORIGINAL" NAME "BARRY HOTTER FINDS THE STONE OF PHILOSOPHY" A VERY INTRUIGING TITLE IF I DO SAY SO MYSELF.

IN THIS BOOK, MR HOTTER DISCOVERS THAT HE IS A WIZARD AND IS TAKEN TO WIZARDING SCHOOL WITH HIS FRIENDS. SOUND FAMILIAR? YOU'D BE RIGHT TO THINK SO... THOUSANDS OF WORDS WERE TYPED AND THE NOVEL WAS COMPLETE. SHE BLOGGED ABOUT HER NEW NOVEL AND HER FANS LOVED IT! MS BOWLING WAS SHOWERED IN MANY POSITIVE COMMENTS AND LIKES, BUT WHAT SHE DOES NEXT IS THE ULTIMATE DISASTER...

MS BOWLING MADE A FOLLOW-UP POST ON HER BLOG, WITHIN THAT POST SHE SAID THE WORDS, "IF YOU WANT TO SUPPORT MY AUTHOR ENDAVOURS, PLEASE DONATE SOME MONEY TO ME THRU PAYPAL" WITH A LINK TO HER PAYPAL.

THIS. ACTIVATED. THEM.

IN A FLASH, ALL THE POWER TO MS BOWLINGS HOUSE WAS CUT, HER MOTHER CALLED TO HER, ASKING IF EVERYTHING WAS OKAY, BUT SHE RECIEVED NO RESPONSE.

SILENCE FILLED THE BOWLING HOUSEHOLD, THEN IT WAS FILLED WITH LAUGHTER, A LOT OF LAUGHTER, THE LAUGHTER OF A HUNDERED CREATURES. GOBLINS. GOBLINS WITH TERRIBLE THREE-INCH TEETH WITH RAZOR SHARP POINTS. CLAWS TO MATCH THE TEETH AND LEGS THAT RUN FAST, OH SO FAST.

THE GOBLINS CONTINUED TO LAUGH IN UNISON BEFORE THEY ALL STOPPED AT ONCE AND STARED AT A.K BOWLING AND INTO HER SOUL. THEN ALL AT ONCE THEY OPENED THEIR MOUTHS AND SPOKE AT ONCE.

"YOU HAVE VIOLATED THE LAW. YOU HAVE VIOLATED INTERNATIONAL COPYRIGHT LAW. BY ATTEMPTING TO PROFIT OFF OF A WORK WITH MANY ELEMENTS STOLEN FROM ANOTHER FRANCHISE YOU MUST PAY THE ULTIMATE PRICE"

THEIR MOUTHS CLOSED, AND THEY BEGAN TO CLOSE IN AROUND MS BOWLING. SHE TRIED TO SCREAM BUT HER SCREAMED WAS DROWNED OUT BY LAUGHTER. HER MOTHER TRIED TO OPEN THE DOOR TO HER ROOM, BUT EVERY TIME THE DOOR OPENED AN INCH, MANY LONG GREEN CLAWS WOULD POKE THOUGH AND SLASH AT HER.

THEIR WORK WAS DONE. THE ULTIMATE PRICE HAD BEEN PAID. ONE HUNDRED GOBLINS SCURRY OUT OF THE BEDROOM WINDOW AND DISSAPEAR INTO THE NIGHT.

MOTHER FINALLY GOT INTO THE ROOM, BUT SHE WAS TOO LATE. MS BOWLING LIE THERE IN THE MIDDLE OF HER BEDROOM. UNMOVING ON HER BACK. HANDS CHEWED OFF. EYES GOUGED OUT. EARS SLICED OFF. TONGUE TIED IN A TERRIBLE KNOT.

A.K BOWLING SURVIVED HER ENCOUNTER WITH THE PLAGARISM GOBLINS. BUT SHE COULD NOT TELL THE TALE, INSTEAD SHE SITS IN HER ROOM ALL DAY. SURROUNDED BY ALL OF HER FAVOURITE BOOKS AND STORIES YET UNABLE TO CONSUME OR DISCUSS THEM.


THANK U TO PPL IN MY LAST POSTA FOR THE INSPIRATION AND CRITICISM HOPFULLY I CAN GET MORE

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PostSubject: Re: CREEPY POST 3   CREEPY POST 3 EmptySun Jan 07, 2024 7:26 pm

HAHAHAHA THIS IS PRETTY GOOD! YOU'RE DOING GOOD SHIT MY FRIEND!

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PostSubject: Re: CREEPY POST 3   CREEPY POST 3 EmptySun Jan 07, 2024 7:27 pm

*Runs past*

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PostSubject: Re: CREEPY POST 3   CREEPY POST 3 EmptySun Jan 07, 2024 8:01 pm

KicktheHABIT wrote:
HAHAHAHA THIS IS PRETTY GOOD! YOU'RE DOING GOOD SHIT MY FRIEND!

THANK YOU :d

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HELLO, SORRY IF IM APROPRIATING GOBLIN CULTURE ITS NOT A REAL STORY I DONT THINK. BUT IF UR OFFENDED I WONT MAKE ANY NEW GOBLIN BASED POSTAS..
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PostSubject: Re: CREEPY POST 3   CREEPY POST 3 EmptySun Jan 07, 2024 8:05 pm

CreepyPoster35 wrote:
KicktheHABIT wrote:
HAHAHAHA THIS IS PRETTY GOOD! YOU'RE DOING GOOD SHIT MY FRIEND!

THANK YOU :d

Goblin wrote:
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HELLO, SORRY IF IM APROPRIATING GOBLIN CULTURE ITS NOT A REAL STORY I DONT THINK. BUT IF UR OFFENDED I WONT MAKE ANY NEW GOBLIN BASED POSTAS..
*Runs past with smile on face*

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PostSubject: Re: CREEPY POST 3   CREEPY POST 3 EmptySun Jan 07, 2024 9:16 pm

I think it's cool to watch a new writer become more powerful
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PostSubject: Re: CREEPY POST 3   CREEPY POST 3 EmptySun Jan 07, 2024 9:25 pm

...what's that UGLY thing...
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PostSubject: Re: CREEPY POST 3   CREEPY POST 3 EmptySun Jan 07, 2024 9:56 pm

That's what she gets for being a Harry Potter fan, heheheh! Stupid books don't even have any creepypastas!! Kikiki!
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PostSubject: Re: CREEPY POST 3   CREEPY POST 3 EmptySun Jan 07, 2024 11:35 pm

start of message -january 7th 2024-
*pip*
ah it's so good to see you improve with each story you create. it's so beautifull seeing an aspiring author bloom before my eyes.
*beep*
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PostSubject: Re: CREEPY POST 3   CREEPY POST 3 EmptySun Jan 07, 2024 11:58 pm

That FUCKING insipid little goblin I will catch him and KILL him

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PostSubject: Re: CREEPY POST 3   CREEPY POST 3 EmptyMon Jan 08, 2024 12:10 am

Heheh, what's your deal, man? Goblins aren't inherently evil. Kind of fucked up to kill someone just for annoying you, kikiki!
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PostSubject: Re: CREEPY POST 3   CREEPY POST 3 EmptyMon Jan 08, 2024 12:11 am

You will be next if you do not stay out of my way
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PostSubject: Re: CREEPY POST 3   CREEPY POST 3 EmptyMon Jan 08, 2024 12:16 am

Oooh... I'm so scared... NOT! HEHEHE!
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PostSubject: Re: CREEPY POST 3   CREEPY POST 3 EmptyMon Jan 08, 2024 1:18 am

I would like to see them try. The Goblin is far, far too fast for any weapon to strike it.

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PostSubject: Re: CREEPY POST 3   CREEPY POST 3 EmptyMon Jan 08, 2024 2:29 am

this is true.
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PostSubject: Re: CREEPY POST 3   CREEPY POST 3 EmptyMon Jan 08, 2024 2:36 am

I heard it can even do a really cool backflip, eheheh!
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PostSubject: Re: CREEPY POST 3   CREEPY POST 3 EmptyMon Jan 08, 2024 2:36 am

*Does cool double backflip as i run*

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PostSubject: Re: CREEPY POST 3   CREEPY POST 3 EmptyMon Jan 08, 2024 2:41 am

Holy shit it just did!
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PostSubject: Re: CREEPY POST 3   CREEPY POST 3 EmptyMon Jan 08, 2024 2:51 am

Bravo, Goblin! What a sight, kikiki!
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PostSubject: Re: CREEPY POST 3   CREEPY POST 3 EmptyMon Jan 08, 2024 11:21 am

MY GOD....
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PostSubject: Re: CREEPY POST 3   CREEPY POST 3 EmptyMon Jan 08, 2024 3:31 pm

Um I'm not really sure what that goblin account is lol weird but this is great! It's your third story ever and it's already incredible! The only critisism I can think of is maybe try building some more atmosphere, let things sit, I like that your story gets straight to the point but the pacing feels a little rushed in places. Great job though (P.S I love the drawing XD)
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PostSubject: Re: CREEPY POST 3   CREEPY POST 3 EmptyMon Jan 08, 2024 3:33 pm

GrinnyKitty wrote:
Um I'm not really sure what that goblin account is lol weird but this is great! It's your third story ever and it's already incredible! The only critisism I can think of is maybe try building some more atmosphere, let things sit, I like that your story gets straight to the point but the pacing feels a little rushed in places. Great job though (P.S I love the drawing XD)
stop it what the fuck is your problem
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PostSubject: Re: CREEPY POST 3   CREEPY POST 3 EmptyMon Jan 08, 2024 3:34 pm

none of you have the unmatched understanding of creepypastas like i do so can you fucking back off and let me handle the criticizing?? godfuckingdamn..
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PostSubject: Re: CREEPY POST 3   CREEPY POST 3 EmptyMon Jan 08, 2024 3:36 pm

Problem implies there's something wrong, which there isn't? I'm just talking to my friend about his/her story, I'm not stopping you from doing the same. We're all equal here
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PostSubject: Re: CREEPY POST 3   CREEPY POST 3 EmptyMon Jan 08, 2024 3:38 pm

we are not equal you are below me in levels you can't even understand these are numbers past negative infinity you cretin.. youre going to confuse this poor soul with your nonsense because you just don't have a proper understanding of this world like I do..
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